Evan, I really enjoyed your story. You have used great imagination in this narrative. What gave you the idea for this story? Next time you tell your story using audioBoo it would be great to find a quiet spot in the classroom away from others. Mummy.
WOW! What an amazing story Evan! I love the description you have used and how you have varied your sentence beginnings and built suspense - thanks for sharing your great writing!
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Evan, I really enjoyed your story. You have used great imagination in this narrative. What gave you the idea for this story? Next time you tell your story using audioBoo it would be great to find a quiet spot in the classroom away from others. Mummy.
WOW! What an amazing story Evan! I love the description you have used and how you have varied your sentence beginnings and built suspense - thanks for sharing your great writing!
Keep up the imaginative writing, Evan. I enjoyed listening to it.
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